A slightly longer version since I think the other one didn't do the debut characters much justice. Though this one has a Mion monologue in it. XP Rena's monologue will be uploaded once two more lines are done.
As always your voice is great for Rika Chihiro! Rena supposed to sound high pitch with her voice like in the original but I like how her new voice sounds lower.
Mion and Satoshi sounds good. Only Rena seems to need a little improvement I think. Nothing negative I am just giving you a suggestion to help you on your project.
The voices were good. Though Satoshi at points sounded mono toned. He should sound more angry when Mion is being rude to Rika. Rena should sound more cuter. She's an ok Rena voice, but I think she should sound cuter. Mion is pretty well, I don't have any complaints.